xuzi
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Post by xuzi on Jul 9, 2007 0:22:53 GMT -5
Pokemon: Sceptile Nickname: Cagdel Type: grass Gender: Male Age: Unsure? Level: 37 Region: ((Where is this Pokemon's type usually found? Johto Alignment: water,grass Pic: Personality: Loving but not afraid to fight. History: started out being a wild pokemon...soon to grow up in the loving hands of me. I raised him good and hes now a lvl 37 sceptile ( once a treeko *when i got him* ) IC: ?
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Sno
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Post by Sno on Jul 11, 2007 9:11:03 GMT -5
Ok a few tips since this bio is totally wrong.
A. It can't be level 37 because all pokemon start at lvl. 5 and in there starter stage. *pokes rules* Read the Rules to find out more about that. B.It can't be in two Alighnments. only one. C. Needs much longer personality D. Needs much longer history and more detail. E. You are not the trainer. You are the pokemon so you didn't get him or catch him. You roleplay him. F. IC means you role play and snip-it of him.
SOrry to sound harsh but it is the rules.
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Sakura the Mew
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Post by Sakura the Mew on Jul 23, 2007 11:25:43 GMT -5
Also Sceptile isn't from the Johto it is from Hoenn.
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